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Tutorial

The front of my business card was inspired by a moo business card titled fingerprints.  It used a more subtle curve design over a gradient. When I get bored, I doodle designs like the one on my card so I also used that for inspiration. I thought that the design looked both creative and slightly graphic at the same time so it fit me well. Due to a bust front, I chose to keep a clean and simple back. I spent a while picking a font to fit in with my logo and felt that a light, rounded sans serif worked well. I added a pop of graphics and color on the back. I chose teal because it was the same color in my logo.

Logo

      I started my logo process by looking at vintage logos and doing retro style sketches. Although I love vintage style, I also really like minimalist contemporary style too so I started to lean more towards that style because it fits me better. I chose a super dark charcoal because I wanted sophisticated, but I didn't want a dark black. I chose the white and lime because they contrasted well with the charcoal color. The green also is unique and creative which I thought represented me well. I used a circle for organization but I used a messier font and paint stroke to show creativity and a bit of chaos in the calmness of a charcoal circle.

Class Critique

Evan

Critique: needs to be closer on interviews

Positive: good angle for the story

Nick

Critique: quiet voiceovers

Positive: nice variety of shots for B roll

Alison

Critique: shakey shots

Positive: all audio was loud enough and the same volune

Courtney:

Critque: in the interview, Austin needs to be looking towards the right

Positive: great angle of story and interview

Dema:

Critique: audio is too quiet at times

Positive: good variety of shots

Rosie: 

Critique: voiceovers don't connect soundbytes much

Positive: Great lighting in each shot

Rylee: 

Critique: follow rule of thirds more

Positive: good story angle

Catherine: 

Critique: voiceovers beed more enthusiasm 

Positive: I liked your angle

Alex: 

Critique: There was very little interview footage 

Positive: great B roll variety

Mitch:

Critique: voiceovers are too quiet

Positive: great interviews

Nicole: 

Critique: there's little enthusiasm in voiceovers

Positive: good shot set up

Drew:

Critique: shakey shots

Positive: good story angle

Emily:

Critique: get closer on interviews

Positive: nice shots! all very stable and have great composition

Conlin: 

Critique: shakey shots

Positive: good story angle

Kyle: 

Critique: some interviews need to be set up closer

Positive: nice interview content

Jacob: 

Critique: The text is not legible

Positive: good angle

Delany: N/A

Abbey: 

Critique: audio volume levels are messy

Positive: great lead!

Amy: 

Critique: audio volune levels change

Positive: great story writting! ex: lead, voiceovers, angle, arrangement of shots

Chelsey: 

Critique: interviews should be closer

Positive: good angle

My audio is messed up and my interview could be closer.

Alyssa: 

Critique: need closer interviews

Positive: good overall voiceovers (volume, tone of voice, writting)